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Tuesday, 13 November 2012

DESCRIPTIVE LEADS


IN HOW MANY WAYS YOU CAN MAKE A DESCRIPTIVE LEAD


DESCRIBES A SCENE AND EXPRESSIONS
 

Suggested titles: LONG TIME SUFFERING,
BARZAKH IN KARACHI, BRIGHT CITY IN DARK 


I was moving with a couple of thought straight to the market with a steady trot,  It was a shimmering night I had to fulfill my daughter’s plight as i was going to bring a doll that she would love the best I didn’t know about a nasty mishap waiting for me.. Suddenly I heard sound of huge bang and screaming of people and then I was no more among the people. My dear little doll is still waiting holding my picture in her hand in a freezing night. Searching me up above the sky” it’s not the story of One man there are many like him who left their home with smiling Goodbye  BUT could not made to reach home with blissful Hello! Because of the blind killings in the city of lights


DESCRIBES A SCENE
Dazzling valley carrying huge trees, waving fields amid high hills with beauty of waterfalls and flowing lakes an uncountable blessings as first sight would leave a doubt of dream world. All of a sudden the colors of nature became fade and valley of heaven turned into ashes with the arrival of earth quake on 8th of October 2005.



DESCRIBES A PERSONALITY
Deep narrow eyes hidden beside round framed spectacles, wrinkled cheeks showing the thick and thin in the life of the Old Man, skin was as translucent as one can see blood flowing through his veins, holding his ancestor’s stick seemed valuable and dear asset for him, A Caretaker “Mujawir” at the shrine of Hazrat Abdullah Shah Ghazi (R.a) renowned as Shah Baba.
Shah Baba a seventy year old person. He has been looking after the shrine since the time of his young hood. He saw people of different ideologies came at the shrine embracing their wishes with the hope of being rewarded. Shah Baba said “Once I saw a lady wearing a necklace indicating she had a faith on Christianity she bowed while entering the shrine and recite DURUD I was surprised to see and asked the purpose of being there the lady said that at the shrine she felt at the height of peace and near to the Creator” People who loved peace and harmony no matters from where they belonged they just wander in search of rest and inner happiness. While talking about the wisdom which Shah Baba had he said “…….. “
When I asked him about any massage for the young ones he said “……... “After having a hot cup of tea and goodbye lines I returned home with a solid aim of contributing in the world as a human First.