Friday, 9 November 2012
Editorial and Column
EDITORIAL
•Begin
with the introduction of news
briefly (talk over recent issues eg
hurricane sandy, anti Islam movie, school was taken as marriage hall, 65 years
of Independence ,
•Opinion
•single
topic
•May
have statements
•Lead
editorial
•Editor’s
note
Purpose
Inform
Influence
Entertain
Reviewing events(14 august, 9/11,Eid
festival)
an editorial published in Dawn newspaper over attack on malala. "Symbol of resistance"
http://dawn.com/2012/10/11/symbol-of-resistance/
COLUMN
•By
line
•Political,
social, health, education issues, personal experiences
•Can
use first person singular
•facts
are written along with opinion
Taliban claimed that the attack on malala was carried
out by them at the will
of Maulana Fazlullah,
reportedly hiding in Afghanistan.
Pakistan has requested the Afghan government to
hand over Fazlullah and
his men.
It is extremely shameful that
an Islamic scholar is involved in targeting a teenage just because she
was for education..(The Dawn Newspaper 2nd November,2012)
http://dawn.com/2012/11/02/malala-and-ttp-logic/
http://dawn.com/2012/11/02/malala-and-ttp-logic/
•May
carry any statement
e.g.
“Malala was
doing work for foreign media” XYZ said
How to make a descriptive lead
DESCRIPTIVE LEAD
Define the
atmosphere, actions and movements
(e.g. “It was a sunny morning and I was
sitting in my
lovely garden enjoying aroma of shinny tulips thinking about my upcoming days )
Define expressions to make the
write up alive
(e.g.
When I met
my friend I found her so worried she was frequently trembling
her
spectacles up and down)
Use dialogues as a
hook for the reader
e.g “I have broken a precious lamp” she said
with a dreaded
voice
and started
crying.
(For story) Create
a background if you are defining a new character or some turning point
e.g.
: I was reading a book when doorbell rung and I was surprised to see my aunt.
I was feeling very hopeless after the
terrible mishap. I called one of my dearest friends she consoled me and when
she told me about a disable physicist I realized that life has not finished at
all.
My all the excitement turned
fade when I heard that the ….
How to select the style of lead
First of
all consider the reader’s interest “think as
a reader
first”
•Is
it
good to compare then and now approach?
•Is
it interesting to give the reader a style of story ?
•Is
it better to raise the question?
•Is
there any great quote
or a humorous line for the
story?
•Can
you tease or shock the reader through some bitter facts?
* Climax must be thought provoking. It
may ends with a famous saying, verse, question or simple massage for the
readers.
CREATIVE LEAD
BLIND
LEAD
While sitting in the restaurant it was so weird
to see the couples dressed up with rosy code. Everyone had a floret in hand.
Some were singing, some were keeping promises and some were playing with the
two story strawberry cake.It was
looking like a rose valley. But why it was so weird? Because those blissful
people didn’t know rose has always some thorns in it. It’s a vale of tines that
is the “valley of thorns”
ROMAN LEAD
Bakray K
Tikkay
, Hunter Beef, roasted lamb and seekh kabab oranay
k baad
bohat
bohat
namkeen or chatpati
si
Eid
MUBARAK!!!!
I know that it feels so zabardast
when you enjoy a sizzling and steamy bar-b-cue in the foggy and chilling
night, soothing aroma of Kababs
makes
you just feel like dil mangay
more!
EXAGGERATING LEAD
(a kind of humor lead)
(a kind of humor lead)
Reddish Brown Creature with RED Horrible
round eyes headed frequently moving Antennas coming
straight towards me.. with hairy legs seems a RED PREDATOR..COCKROACH!!!!! Why
this filthy creature visits the KITCHEN !
GAG LEAD
Do you want to make Money from FACEBOOK?Its quite easy just Go to your account
setting De-Activate your account and go to work! Use of social Networks has been increasing day by day particularly Facebook is famous among youngsters.
setting De-Activate your account and go to work! Use of social Networks has been increasing day by day particularly Facebook is famous among youngsters.
STORY LEAD
Baber is 13
but looks like an adult that’s because he was one of the servants working in a mini bus
shouting out the names of
stops for passengers since he was nine. There
are certain laws for controlling child labor but the question is who is going to implement these laws..?
SUMMARY LEAD
Pakistan has recently passed law greatly
limiting child labor but many of these kind of laws are
universally ignored and some 11 million children age four to Fourteen keep
country’s factories operating often working in brutal and squalid conditions.
SURPRISING LEAD
New studies in Australia on the
great white shark's brain had revealed important similarities to human brains.
ASTONISHING LEAD
- Around six million death a year are caused by tobacco throughout world according to the annual survey of World Health Organization.
- Every 6.5 seconds a current or former smoker dies according to the World health Organization
- In Pakistan 100,000 people die each year because of smoking according to the World Health Organization.
- Cancer is the 2nd leading cause of death worldwide, while the Incidence of cancer in Pakistan is about 1.4 million per year according to the reports of World Health Organization
RHYME/JINGLE LEAD
(Seasons
on the earth)
Winter , spring ,summer and fall surprises and
joy hidden in all. Let’s welcome Autumn, about which some says season of
harvest and some believes interval.
OR
Seasons come and seasons leave, new
vision to see new dreams to weave. The season is on the way when trees free
their leaves and allow others to greet.
QUESTION LEAD
Have you ever seen a doppelganger/twin of
our Politician, Leader or A player? Do you know they do exist at some place? If
not yet then you must know that they are in the Madame Tussaud, a wax museum in London.
FRAGMENTED LEAD
After the test, after the surgery, after radiation, after
Cancer one must learn to live with the disease” Osama said with the shrug of
shoulders, a prolonged disease made his matter of fact approach to life.
Osama Hanif
age 28 has been suffering from lung cancer since four years but did not let his
hope die. He knew at the age of 24 that He was suffering from lung cancer.
for Article/ Feature on the topic above
In Articles
Ø Old
methods of treatments (chemotherapy)
Ø New
methods (immunotherapy)
Ø estimate
for the treatment
Ø Equipment
in the Hospital
Ø Rate
of patients who have survived
Ø Role
of Govt
In Feature
Ø Case
history of some of the patients and their
experiences(opinion)
Ø Opinion of govt employees regarding health affairs
Ø Opinion of private hospital management.
THINGS TO BE REMEMBER
Ø Balanced
writing
Ø Take
both the negative and positive aspects regarding the efforts for treatment
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